Who The Hell Are You

I evade and you should go, seems there is distortion in the radio...

People call you friend

One must question why they go so willingly to this end

Love and compassion feigned

Such echelons not all can maintain

Passion sure, but also disdain

A character of some feeble imagination

Character of calculation

"If you're sick of yourself

just so you can say you knew 

I"m sick of you too"

Your careful words,

I guess between the lines no one heard

But I won't be baited nor lured

My personality remains unobscured

Of such a disease as you, I am cured

Have you begun to contemplate

At this rate, the potential build up for hate

"If you're sick of yourself

just so you can say you knew

I'm sick of you too"

You seek to bring about change

But you're a character flaw that can't be rearranged 

I need a ten and your loose change

No system of even exchange

My concepts are truly beyond your range

You get this yet

If not , you will I bet

"If you're sick of yourself

just so you can say you knew

I'm sick of you too"

Author's Note

I needed to get some anger off my chest. Critique or comment at will please.

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

I really liked the way you have written this piece :)
Specially the three lines you have used three times..
Picture is totally attached to this writing:)
Sometime we should remove our anger ..so that we can smile again :)
WOnderful poem !!

Your Friend
Akshat

[unsavable_soul]

Thank you much Askhat,
I am glad you were able to enjoy this writing and the art with it. As for smiling I am working on it. I did get the anger off my chest though.
Thanks again.
Sincerely
Christopher

[Akshat♥]

You are always welcome dear...I hope you will smile everyday :)

[unsavable_soul]

You as well friend.

[Frieda P]

Wonderful poetic rant, much enjoyed your hissy fit. ;-)

[unsavable_soul]

Glad you liked my fit.
I have to have one every now and again. But that's over so on to better stuff right.
Thanks Frieda
Chris

[Frieda P]

Hey if we don't purge every now and then, we'll implode. My pleasure Chris.

[Bear]

Christopher,
A very well written poem.

[unsavable_soul]

Thank you Bear,
I appreciate you letting me know you liked it.
Chris

[Mighty Me]

I am taken by the amount of emotion that you put into this. I hope to only write so well. I love the rhythm and your artistry of words. Magnificent

Mighty Me

[unsavable_soul]

I haven't had a chance to read your works yet, i am sure however you bring your own sense and style to this world that I could not. I am very glad you liked this. I hope to move on from this piece with more adoration for those I would otherwise condemn. Thanks again Mighty Me.
Sincerely
Christopher

[Aiden]

wow. I can feel the bitterness in this one. I guess we shouldnt get on your bad side? I jest. Nice work.

[unsavable_soul]

I have a bad side,
But it is hard to get there these days, what you see here is as far as I go in hate anymore. I write it and move on. Hate consumed me once, and I wouldn't want it again. Glad you liked this Aiden, thanks.
Sincerely
Christopher

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Jeezum, i wouldn't want to be on the other side of an argument with you. How do you so well written pick someone apart. Do you get counseling for this if not you might want to consider it, lol/. You know I'm kidding with you.
Nice angry writing.
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[unsavable_soul]

Did get,
This helps more I tend to think. I find I am the only one who can work through my problems, so I pour it out. Thanks for enjoying this Jessie.
Sincerely
Christopher

[Jessica Gillitzer]

Maybe you need a little more j/k lol
I feel you on working out problems with your writing, i think alot of us do it.
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[unsavable_soul]

I do need more counseling and that's for sure.
Chris

[Rita L. Sev]

Ouch! "You're a character flaw that can't be rearranged..." The anger certainly comes through! Well written, clear purpose, powerful. I hope you feel lighter after writing this piece.

[unsavable_soul]

I do,
Sometimes pain most be expressed in anger. I know without anger I become damaged goods. I hope despite it's negativity you found enjoyment in this. Thanks for the appreciation on this Rita.
Sincerely
Christopher

[Rita L. Sev]

I choose not to dwell in negativity, but I will wade in it for a bit as needed. You are absolutely right that these things must be expressed, or they become a permanent part of us.