SCENT OF YOUR PERFUME

SCENT OF YOUR PERFUME

A Poem by RJ620Win

I am so happily doomed and groomed
By the enchanting scent of your perfume
You have such a wonderful bouquet
It doesth hold the spring Magnolias at bay,

The Empress Josephine* would have spent
Her country’s fortune to bare your scent
Pirre Magnol* would have lavished the same
Just to speak of what I pray to claim,

Your perfume is a Southern French delight
A mystic fragrance of attractive starlight
Your natural aroma is more of the same
My heart shall forever carry your sweet name.

© 2010 RJ620Win


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Wow, I love the rhymes! I especially love the ending!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. Very universal, and it gave me flashbacks.

Posted 8 Years Ago


ahhh..the aroma of a woman...
lovely poem...lovely rhyming...
Interesting how perfume smells differently on everyone...
the perfume applied is modified by her own scent to become something unique...
hers and only hers...for some lucky guy to appreciate...

Posted 8 Years Ago


speechless

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this poem, and I agree with Coyote. The scent of a woman is enough to keep us hypnotized for days. (Personal experience) Anyways, good write and good choice of words....but a question... why is there a '*' at the end of Magnol and Josephine?

Posted 8 Years Ago


The sweet scene of a woman can leave us confused and content. I like the smell of a woman after a long bath. Her aroma can leave you wishing for more. I like the story and the ending. Your words were beautiful. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow ! this was really phenomenal cause a small thing as a woman's scent (perfume) has been used as a muse to weave an entire poem . would have been easier had you added the significance of the * marked terms in the author's note . the rhyme scheme was sweet .

Posted 8 Years Ago



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RJ620Win
RJ620Win

Dipolog City, region IX, Philippines



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I am no one....nothing special; just a common guy with common thoughts and principles. I've lived and led a common life but remarkable. There are no monuments dedicated to me and my name will soon be .. more..

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