recent experience..

recent experience..

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

while i was walking through life..!!
i made many friends, and enemies too..!
enemies don't let me live and friends don't let me die..
i'm standing in between and don't know where to go
my inner soul forcing me to choose one..!!
i'm getting crush whether to live for myself or die for my satisfaction...
life become tough for me..life gave me many wounds that can't be healed...
time comes when i was so broken inside this journey took my inner confidence..
and at times i was so lively...
this time i realize what life is about
its just playing a game with all of us...
no one will be left alive..one day every one has to die...
life tought me what it is and what we have to be to live in this cruel world
day will come when you come to know no one is ours..
 

 
friends will be no more friends..
you will be left alone..just you and your soul....!! 

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^


Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
this one is very close to my heart...it just came from the depth of my heart...its the true one...and it related to my life..!

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I really loved this piece of writing as it is so deep and thoughtful.
You are right and this is what exactly the reality of life is...often we waste our times while searching for the right chances rather than creating them!
Often we all feel this way in some or other way....
This is indeed a very well penned piece of writing, so raw yet so powerful!
Great work :)


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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and this reminds me of Bella's inner struggle, and one of my own as well
having to choose to live a life of hardship and safety and false accusations is tough
would you die knowing you couldn't survive in a world so wrong.... so untrue....
so cruel


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


I really loved this piece of writing as it is so deep and thoughtful.
You are right and this is what exactly the reality of life is...often we waste our times while searching for the right chances rather than creating them!
Often we all feel this way in some or other way....
This is indeed a very well penned piece of writing, so raw yet so powerful!
Great work :)


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 14, 2009
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