i'm LOST here..!

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

i am lost in this crowd

and i'm unable to find the path

which will lead me to my soul

those devils tried to douse my

inner soul, is trying to step on me

i tried so hard but i'm sorry they succeed

i'm struggling so hard,

trying to pass this kingdom of hell,

where i'm unable to see

my own footsteps,

unable to see me.its so dark

and my heart is filled with darkness

finally i have stepped on

broken pieces of mirror...

like the broken pieces of my heart

and moved ahead from hell

but it still feels i'm standing on hot coal

but i have passed it

and i'm glad i have made an attempt

to move AHEAD..

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^

Author's Note

....!sometimes life take us to a stage where we are unable to find ourself...!and we try so hard to move ahead....!

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The High Poet

Very well written piece of work. I enjoyed reading it very much, thanks for referring it to me.

Have a great day
The High Poet

Posted 15 Years Ago

Carole

Your piece reminds me of the age old song entitled, Amazing Grace:

Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound,
That saved a wretch like me -
I once was lost but now am found,
Was blind, but now, I see.

T'was Grace that taught -
my heart to fear.
And Grace, my fears relieved.
How precious did that Grace appear -
the hour I first believed.

Through many dangers, toils and snares -
we have already come.
T'was Grace that brought us safe thus far -
and Grace will lead us home.

The Lord has promised good to me -
His word my hope secures.
He will my shield and portion be -
as long as life endures.

When we've been here ten thousand years -
bright shining as the sun.
We've no less days to sing God's praise -
then when we've first begun.

Amazing Grace, how sweet the sound,
That saved a wretch like me -
I once was lost but now am found,
Was blind, but now, I see.

You have written about something we have all experienced at one time or another-particularly at such a young age. We often have to realize how lost we are before we are found-We must realize a need before it is filled. When we cannot get any lower, it is then that we look up and find our answer. :-)

Blessings, Carole