THANKYOU my friend

THANKYOU my friend

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

 Today I felt cheated once again

I felt so bad but that was just for a moment

Because now I know for whom I have to care

I care for those who care for me

And I didn’t felt bad at all b’coz "I DON'T CARE FOR YOU"

Thank you god for letting me came across her reality

That was you who taught me to care for those who care

That was your cheatings which made me strong..

Thank you my friend all credit goes to you

Thank you for making a difference in my life

Thank you for making me a better person

Thanks a lot all credit goes to you my pal

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^


Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
this is the one dedicated to my pal "S_ _ _ _ _".......thanks a lot you was my true cheat pal...!and thankyou for making me a better person...

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I have often heard it said that there are three types of people in our lives Vaishali: Those that don't like us, those that tolerate us and those that celebrate our lives. Surround yourself with those that celebrate your life. They are the ONLY ones that really MATTER. Those that cheat us, lie to us, and treat us disrespectfully are amongst those that obviously do not like us, or do not know how to treat people. At any rate, they definitely don't celebrate our lives...If it took this person cheating you to realize the type of person you don't want to be, then I can see why you thanked them. For how would we learn anything without life lessons? Life lesson's are the BEST ways to learn! You are a mature, 15-year-old! Good for you!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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No sharing here. I hope you can someday forgive S----- . Remember what doesn't kill us makes us stronger. Thanks

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is sad, its horrible to loose a friend!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is the spirit...of a survivor, a winner...!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some times the harshest lessons in life are the most valuable... great poem of finding strength amongst hard times.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have often heard it said that there are three types of people in our lives Vaishali: Those that don't like us, those that tolerate us and those that celebrate our lives. Surround yourself with those that celebrate your life. They are the ONLY ones that really MATTER. Those that cheat us, lie to us, and treat us disrespectfully are amongst those that obviously do not like us, or do not know how to treat people. At any rate, they definitely don't celebrate our lives...If it took this person cheating you to realize the type of person you don't want to be, then I can see why you thanked them. For how would we learn anything without life lessons? Life lesson's are the BEST ways to learn! You are a mature, 15-year-old! Good for you!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmm....It's okay Vaishali :)
not your best though, but still very heartfelt and sad!
but this is what life is all about...moving on :)
As once in everyone's life a time comes, when the person whom you trusts the most will hurt you the most and then it depends upon you....for what matters more, the person or the hurting :)


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm confused as to why you requested me read this again.
I take it as that I'm missing something when I read the poem.

I'm not sure. I sense a sardonic tone, but I have another idea.
The person, some how through their wrong doings (I get the impression), allowed you to open your eyes and change for the better.
So it's not necessarily sardonic or sarcastic, and it's not exactly sweet or nice.
Maybe it's just a humble thank you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tough, hard to face up to the true, any relationship change to some fashion, after you are lied to, lies are evil, they hurt the soul and take away the trust and confidence we had for the liar, and in a way the trust we have in all others can suffer because of it . Time can heal our soul and make us wiser from the lesson. Thank you for sharing, a great and honest write.
God bless you.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. it is horrible to thing of someone close to your heart cheating you.. but you have true spirit and have chosen to take the positive out of such a situation... I still feel pain through it but when people hurt us it is better to become a better person than repeat such behaviour such as getting even... the best revenge is just living a better life and moving forward!!! Your writing sends this message however I myself know that it is a tougher fight to believe it entirely from day to day.. I hope you find someone more true to your heart!!! Thank you so much for sharing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just read this again.
And now I'm looking back at my comment below and I'm ashamed of it.
I read it completely wrong - I think.
This isn't sweet. This is sarcastic! Right?

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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