i was right..!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i tried to be happy in the days of tide

I tried to smile in the times of crying

I tried to not care for those who lied

I tried to cheer up for those who cared

I tried to ignore those who don’t wanna talk

I tried to be quiet when no one was interested

I tried to forget all through my writings

I tried so hard but I was unsuccessful

I tried so much but my desires left unfulfilled

I tried so hard to meet success one day

I tried and I tried and I tried and I’m glad that I glide

I tried because of the fake crowed in my life

I tried because someone really matters in my life

I tried for being what I am and I’m me today

I was trying for success and I was right

I tried to bring myself back and I did because my trials were right….

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Anita B Jacques]

A awesome write my friend, so honest and heartfelt poem. I favored this " I tried to be what I am and I'm me today. I tried to bring myself back and I did because my trials were right.' A positive note. Do our best and keep trying. I love the picture of the Virgin Marie with the candle. Tank you for sharing with us, God Bless you.
Hugs, Love and friendship
Annie

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Hi there, oh you are sooo right.. there is a world full of fakes and liars.. but I believe they are placed in this world to help us cherish the real good people in our lives.. everything in life is a trial of sorts.. you are still very young and will come across much before you grasp that true success.. I keep life simple myself.. the things that are most important to me are the people around me, my children and their happiness! I would rather die poor and happy .... then rich and sad! Love your work... keep working on it.. I really believe you have some talent.. I have read your other work and you are so young with alot of great knowledge already! =)

[Ralphy]

I like your poem, it has a solid message and flow. I think there is more here than I can see. What I do see is your determination to complete your goal, Showing how much you tried to communicate with others but really didn't seem to get their help. But instead found help in God. nice write and expression.