i love you dad

i love you dad

A Poem by Vaishali..^_^

 

I love you dad...

For all the times you stand beside...

For all the times you made me smile...


I love you...
For being there at my side...
For being there at my pride...

I love you..
For all the sacrifice you made for my smile
For all the pain you took by my side...

I love you...
For making me what I’m today...
For encouraging me to be me...

I love you..
For the troubles you took for my leisure
For the strive you did for my desires

I love you..
For being polite even after my disgrace
For being there even after my mistakes

I love you 
For all you did for me...
For all you will be doing for me...
 
I love you dad 
Your princess will stand up for your needs
And make you feel at ease
 

© 2009 Vaishali..^_^


Author's Note

Vaishali..^_^
this one is dedicated to my dad...he was always there with me...!as i been through many problems but he was always standing by my side...!
as we come to know he value of a person when he is only the one standing by our side no matters what...in good and bad situation....
and i think many can relate to this...!!
and i just wanna say i love you dad...this one for you....thanks for being always there for me...!

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I just love reviewing such personal pieces of writing.. why? Because they are genuine and straight from the heart!!! You made my day.. this one is so touching.. you definitely should consider maybe framing this one and giving it to your father for father's day or a birthday maybe.. I've written for members of my family and there is so much personality and passion in each piece! Thank you for sharing this...there is no love like that of a Dad!!! sincerely.. =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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wow i love this, i not that close to my dad but now after reading this, it made me want to be closer to him.
great writing:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this poem... i wish i could say something like this to my dad... but it would be exactly the opposite... it is an awesome poem though..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can't help but say, "Awwww" when reading this. This is so sweet and such a wonderful gesture to that special someone who has been there for you and helped you out, and never stopped believing in you, your father. Touching and sweet.
Cheers.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's so nice to read something so full of love and appreciation for someone like a parent, I feel like sometimes we overlook the people in our lives but this makes me think about how we should always treasure them for all the positive things they do to impact our lives. I really like this poem and I applaud your feeling behind it! Great work.



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very very sweet :) really enjoyed the read. In my opinion, the end was, by far, the best part of the piece. You really put the thought at a great close, but still kept the reader thinking. (if that makes any sense) I'm sure a lot can relate to this because really, you have to think of your own experiences to grasp the beauty of this poem! Thanks for posting this :)

-Austin

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great write and very moving one. With your poem you are sharing with us the Love you have for your Dad, and how grateful you are toward him, you are letting your feelings flow out, please let your father know grateful your are for his love, and show him also with your actions. God Bless you.
Hugs, love and friendship
Annie

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really sweet, and i feel the same way about my dad! he's my hero!
i like how you constructed this, and had all of the i love yous.
good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your Dad. I think this is definitely something you should show your Dad, what better way is there to show him how much he means to you?
Wonderfully written. Thank You for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely love this piece, I have gotten to see a part of your soul and that means a ton. Wonderfully written and wonderful meaning.

Janice

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful poem, full of the emotion of daughter reflecting into her daddy's eyes. One can feel the words drip down the page as the splendors of years transgress from the bubbling memories. Being a dad myself, I know each stanza would liquefy from my eyes. Beauty write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 23, 2009