An Evening Rose

Well, I think the scene is self-explanatory. It's a girl playing the "he loves me, he loves me not" game.

An Evening Rose

"He loves me!"
said she, in the scarlet sun,

in her secretive spot,

waiting for none.

And poor old me

how long I could have run,

"He loves me not,"

there goes another one.

And she laughs as I cry

As she screams, I'm just dry

And as my last limb is torn and thrown into the sky

she screams, "He loves me!"

Author's Note

An in depth review would be nice, I really need to improve my writing skills.