Do You Even Care

Do You Even Care

A Poem by D.A.Ravenda

Do you even care

when you say you will

when I know you wont





Do you even care

that I cant even look forward 

to seeing you again




Do you even care

that I am so afraid

that last was the last time




Do you even care

I have to make other plans

to avoid feeling a fool




Do you even know 

that I cant rely on you

that I cant trust your word




Do you even care

I forgive you every time

because I love you




I doubt you even care about that.

© 2015 D.A.Ravenda


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I can relate to this writing I have certainly felt that the person I love doesn't care a bit. I like the arrangement of your poem and the first line especially... Do you even care how you say you will when I know you won't. Nice write! Thanks for sharing!
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D.A.Ravenda
D.A.Ravenda

Lodi, NJ



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Hi! My name is Daniel Ravenda. This is my website and a portal into my mind. This is where I plan on putting all the crazy things I cant fit in my head. I have been writing since I'm literally five .. more..

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