Last conversation

It is the conversation between an old man and God. who did everything bad in his life. He saw a dream when he was sleeping on his last night. This conversation represents here in a poetic way.

Man: hey God, I’m standing at your place on my pride,

          to talk with you for a very short time.

God:  say dear, I’m living in each part of life,

           So this is not only place for mine.

Man: God, why you didn’t blessed me like your son,

           When I was getting birth in the presence of Sun.

God:  huh, but my dear son how I blessed you,

           Without your any work done.

Man: will you tell me somehow,

           Here I’m getting very suck.

God:  OK, but some of your desires made by your good work.

Man: I’m getting tired of doing many good,

           Now I’m pulling down by my bad mood.

God:  oh, I remember you are the one who don’t be there when she was stood,

           And don’t give happiness to your mother even the food.

Man: that was my last fault because I was reaching towards my goal,

           But still I don’t know why my son left us all.

God:  you were forgetting that your mom cried each time when you get fall.

           And still you are forgetting that everything will die in this world but the remaining things are called soul.

Man: I get realized I did very bad like I was being a fake,

           Here confessing in front of God for my entire mistake.

God:  you are going towards good and being awake,

           But remember past time will never come back.

Man: from now I’ll take decision by true determination,

           So please give me a last chance without any hesitation.

God (in his mind): now I’ll give you blessing, here you’ll make your happy nation,

           But I’m sorry that you don’t know it’s your LAST CONVERSATION.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

God: oh , I remember you are the one who don ’t
be there when she was stood,
And don’t give happiness to your mother even the
food .
these lines I found hard to understand, its a bit unclear. the ending was awesome though, love it :)