Love happen only once rest is life

It is a story of a lover in a poetic manner. It starts from first day when he saw her and goes forward with love. But ends with a surprise.

That was the hot day of June,

I saw you in the shiny noon.

 

You were going to temple for pray,

I also start walking on your way.

 

Next day I met you in my graduate school,

You were looking at me like i was a fool.

 

That time the dress you wearing was very bright,

And I swore you were looking like bride.

 

I started loving you from that day,

You were also ready to say.

 

After day by day we were coming close,

Like the fragrance live in the rose.

 

1st day when we purposely get wet into rain,

Then we go for travel into the train.

 

In that white moony light,

I ran to hug you at first sight.

 

After a few became a happy couple,

And we don't have any trouble.

 

The big enemy of our love comes from your past,

Because your fiance come back who was your last.

 

Your past love were still awake,

You were going like I am a fake.

 

You get married with your future,

Here this makes me feel very torture.

 

All of our memories become a lie,

And I was getting ready to die.

 

This journey were being happy for you,

But the days of my life remains very few.

 

My life gone with my time,

After it I get a sweet partner of mine.

 

Bad days were moving as a turn,

And I enjoyed these as a fun.

 

This time I have a cute child with a beautiful wife,

but now I realize LOVE HAPPEN ONLY ONCE REST IS LIFE.

Author's Note

it is not the good but i want your reviews to make a good one next time.

thanking you :)

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Very good. You made progress with this one. And like always, it was simple and nice. Though it would be better if this could be changed: in one line you used 'After day by day' which can either be 'After days' or 'day by day'. and also 'moony' should be just 'moon'. But like I said, you are making progress :)

[Rhea]

itz nice....short & sweet.. :)