A Poem by Matt

Your Just another flaw.
Something to be remembered in a scar.
Just a f*****g stain in a car.
Another pain cured in a blunt.

You turned breaking my heart into a hunt.

Just another summer tragedy.
Another scream to prove to me...
I was always wrong.

You never regret.

f**k it, here's the breakdown

(Clears throat) ehhh hem.
This is past all consequence.
Scarring becomes damned irrelevant.
Bleeding tongues drown my sorrows away.
A shot of Jack brings your memories to slay.
And you i thought you remembered.
Feeling, its getting old.
Make me numb, pop a pill,
drink a bottle and remember still.
Your picture is like eating lead.
Burn my tongue with the words never said.

Ears aren't worth your lies.
And I'm finished; with you.
With singing fake three worded lullabies.

so ill cut it into two.
F**k you!

© 2010 Matt

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very expressive. a lot of anger and sorrow. but this is very memorable. i loved it.


Posted 13 Years Ago

This was a good poem. I liked it a lot. I can understand what if feels like to go through that. I have been through many things that I don't like going through it is really hard. I know that many people go through a lot, but they don't always deserve it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

Just another summer tragedy.
^^ Loved that bit, their are to much cliche's about Summe rbeing love, happiness and yet you brought a sense of tragedy into it. Something different. Love the concept. Mad skills Matt, deep too ;)


Posted 13 Years Ago

It's really good. great read.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Naw I loves it

Posted 13 Years Ago

Its really interesting ^-^ nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago

Wow! I like this. A lot of emotion in this and the rhyming pattern is a tad interesting but Great Write!

Posted 13 Years Ago

wait so are you saying its bad?

Posted 13 Years Ago

Haha so I'll cut it into two. F**k you! Nice I couldn't stop laughing at the seriousness of it.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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9 Reviews
Added on July 26, 2010
Last Updated on December 9, 2010
Tags: poetry, lust, pain, drinking, sex, tongues, Allegory, Alliteration, Allusion, Amplification, Anagram, Analogy, Anaphora, For, in, UK, anastrophe, regret, hate, boy, romance, broken, spitefull, fuck



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