In Train

This is all about a mind with full of abstract thoughts trying to solve the puzzle called 'LIFE'.

In Train

I am in a train of happiness that could lead me to death.

The page of demands lives in a secret place.

No matter what the situation is _i'll be the same as I am.

Because after death, the existing happiness in my soul would be my life...

I am in a train of dreams that could lead me to death.

Leaving the smell of success behind me.

No matter what the screams be_ I'll be the same as I am.

Because after death, the only part remaining will be my dreams...

I am in a train of depression which could lead me to death.

The Life of mine is ready to die.

No matter what the result be_ I'll be the same I am.

Because it's not the life but fame that lives and never dies...

                                       - Vidit v kumar

Author's Note

Feedback Appreciated. Ignore grammatical mistakes.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the style and the presentation of the poem. Very amusing, thoughtful views on life and death are creatively written. I really liked this. Well done.

[Vidit V Kumar]

Thanks for the valuable review Najam. Glad you like it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.