Barbwire love

Sometimes you can't help yourself

　

                                     Barbwire love

 

They told me to run,

Hide away from your hypnotic lure,

Like a magnet you pull me,

Away from every logical thought,

The sound of your voice whispering my name,

Ushers me into the arms of insanity.

 

We clash like fire and ice,

Every heated word effective foreplay,

Your touch it sears and runs deep,

Till you are like a fever raging in my blood,

I would drain my veins,

If it would cure my affliction.

 

I am everything you want,

But nothing you need,

You are my weakness and as the pendulum swings,

I bring you to your knees,

Wrong or right,right or wrong

Together,both or neither.

 

You have etched your name,

Across my heart, my soul,my psyche.

And claimed me as yours,

Branded for eternity ,

Imprisoned by our barbed wire love,

Felled by its double edged sword.

Author's Note

A song spawned this.Sorry :)

Reviews

[BloodySkye]

An intricate piece. Kinda remind of a hate and love relationship I have wit someone.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Skye .I appreciate your words :)

[Ren Grace]

Painful but it's love. Very intriguing....

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Lauren :)

[Marie]

That sounds really painful.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Marie :)

[Shaquana Adams]

I love this. I think it's creative. Nice work ^-^
-QuanaWana

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Shaquana :)

[Leigh]

A love hate relationship can hurt and be very rewarding too...so I've been told and you describe that bitter sweet state of being very well, I very much enjoyed this one.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Leigh for your kind words :)

[Konigin]

This hit me really hard. I know this spawned from a song, but it happened in real life for me... Great job. Wonderful read, fantastic pen! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hello Chelsea nice to meet you and thank you so very much :)

[Konigin]

Nice to meet you too Vidya! :) And you are most welcome. :)

[emmajoy]

' I am everything you want, ~ But nothing you need,'

Any song that makes you admit to that is both enemy and friend! Tis, for me, the core of this amazing piece of writing: sensuous, frank, deep and dangerous. And, what's more, is absolutely nothing to apologise for. Passion in everything whether reading, listening, dancing, cooking, walking etc. is what life's all about. Isn't it?

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Emma for this wonderful review :)

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Wow Vidya I loved this:) a bit of all in feeling:) Awesome my friend:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Jon for your kind words :)

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Welcome Vidya:)))))))))))))))) God morning btw:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Morning Jon.How are you my friend ?

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Ugggg not the greatest stomach has gave me a fit last 2 days now, heart rate has been out there. Other than stomach and sleep I am ok:) how are u and family?

[Vidya Bacchus]

We are most excellent.Sorry to hear that you are not feeling so well.No worries you will feel better soon ya hear :)

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I hear you:)))))))))))))))))))) I am glad to hear the most excellent:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Miles of smiles my sweet friend :)

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Yes miles after miles of smilessssssssssssssssss:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha yes so very many miles over the oceans yes :)

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:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Avinash]

Complex love story depicted by multiple layered expressions.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Avi :)

[BlackRose]

Don't be sorry, we all get inspiration from a song once in awhile. A powerful superb piece of seduction with that bit of passion. When we are in it real good, it's hard to stop. We get caught up in it all, we want more of it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank You Rose.Actually a lot of my inspiration comes from music :)