Hope for the Orchid

Remembrance and solitude

Like a flower in my garden
Blossoming like a orchid
Your love helped me
Helped this morbid
 
I will die for that orchid
Without sense, Feeling torpid
 
Smell of that orchid
In my garden
Creating everything magically
Making me flow with the wind without strategically
 
You created the sense
To use this talent so immense
So immense that I’ll love you till the ending
And I’ll die in your remembrance
 
On my grave put that orchid
That was in my garden
That I never touched was forbid
Was forbid to touch that orchid
 
My grave will give you peace
That much I love you
It will give you bliss
Just put down your head on my grave
When you’ll feel lost
It will remind you how much you brave
 
It will remind you how much you matters
To that grave that you let shatter
 I’ll be thankful to you
That you came
In love we never blame
 
I’m writing this
Eyes full
I’ll not waste this tears
I will water that orchid
That I never touched was forbid
 

Reviews

[Lathen Griffiths]

I felt this was really written from the heart and the title really stood out. My favourite stanza was your lines: “ On my grave put that orchid
That was in my garden
That I never touched was forbid
Was forbid to touch that orchid.”

Regards

Lathen