THE FIRST GIRL WHO

the first girl who ...

from  kapila and dalton to rutherford and others 

they all said 

"it is the atoms and nothing else "

it starts as atoms and dies as atoms..

nothing more ..

nothing more?

well, mate.. have you seen her smile 

every time she does a cloud forms somewhere

 waiting to rain on me 

you should have seen her laugh

surely, a flower blooms in a mystic forest 

sending its soul across through the next breeze that reaches me

you still cant keep saying it is the atoms

it is something more , isnt it 

i am thinking of the first girl who giggled at my silly joke 

what did i say ..

do you remember your firsts , mate

Reviews

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. well, that was the progression ... atom to heart and then to mother ... i find that magically profound ... :) ...

[vivekanand]

no serah, i dint know that about atom heart mother..:)

[...]

. :) ... oh, this is just absolutely delightfully biting ... beautiful images ... of a ravishing smile ... memories ... special memories ... and a romance with life ... (i'm sure you know the history behind the naming of the floyd album 'atom heart mother') ... it's way, way more than atoms ... it's way beyond scientific ... and it's even way beyond artistic ...