the land of no tears

the land of no tears

A Poem by vivekanand

in the cot near the entrance,
kuruvamma haggles with throat cancer,
for a couple of months more..
a sparrow at the mercy of the lashing rains 
she ..

ponnamma rolls her doll eyes
she wants the doctor's nod
for the orange drink,
her long time desire
since her liver broke down
and threw up signals too confusing 
for her vegetable brain..

somewhere in the southern corner,
a bottle of fluids is on the flow..
for the dehydrated ones..

a destitute mother
asks questions
no one wants to listen to..

down the corridor,
there are many more wards like this one..
many more cots,
many more cotless,
many more stories...

the government hospital
waits with its thousand eyes ,
the entries to its mysterious labyrinth 
bright and open..

this night 
people roam its halls 
with blood samples of the kith and kin..
towards laboratories 
clean and alien...
like the linen of the dead and the departed..

the ashoka tree inside the compound 
silently chants to its ancient heart
stories that will soon be forgotten
and hence cease to exist...
as a  rain drop rolls over its diseased bough
a lonely  kingfisher starts off towards 
its eternal search for a  land of no tears...

and in that pretty ordinarymonsoon night,
a rare lightning in the western sky
 reveals 
just for a fleeting instant,
the grey silhouette 
of a sinister madhouse...

© 2011 vivekanand


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. astonishing and remarkable work, dear V. ... poignant beyond measure ... i feel your words ... i felt them as i sat with my mother waiting for her chemotherapy in the cancer ward of AIIMS in new delhi ... not too long ago ... and all i could do was pray ... and pray and pray ... that one day ... the voices of citizens are heard ... and one day ... everything matters ... and nothing is dismissed because on the surface it seems absurd ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, what a fabulous piece! I really enjoyed this. I particularly like the stanza:
" the government hospital
waits with its thousand eyes ,
the entries to its mysterious labyrinth
bright and open.."

It sets the scene for all the preceeds or follows...great writing! Oh, you might wish to separate ordinary and monsoon unless that is just the way you meant for it to be. Either way...lovely work.


Posted 13 Years Ago



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vivekanand
vivekanand

chennai, tamilnadu, India



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trying to find out seriously what i am.. i trained in medicine.. neither had the expertise, confidence nor the desire to move on as a doctor.. preparing for civil services more..

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