there is no posthumous nobel

there is no posthumous nobel

A Poem by vivekanand

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you could live in 
the grandest wax palace 

you could fudge everybody's account 
and still get away
drawing gratification at the heap
curses build..
curses of people who would have lost..


you could eat the best savouries ever made
lounge in the state of art furniture
and sleep in the bosoms of naive beautiful maiden


still you might die 
the dragonfly's death
at the errant child's foot


still you might not...

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you could live in 
the grandest wax palace 

you could fudge everybody's account 
and still get away
drawing gratification at the heap
curses build..
curses of people who would have lost..


you could eat the best savouries ever made
lounge in the state of art furniture
and sleep in the bosoms of naive beautiful maiden


still you might die 
the dragonfly's death
at the errant child's foot


before the last breath 
you tend to think 
you will be remembered..


you won't be...

© 2011 vivekanand


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Two versions -loved the unique character of the poem---still you might not--that line says so much but you can get away with all of those crimes
Second version is the one which tries to instill fear - fear of being forgotten in the passage of time--Death is the end , there are no 2nd chances-real or in memories.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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vivekanand
vivekanand

chennai, tamilnadu, India



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trying to find out seriously what i am.. i trained in medicine.. neither had the expertise, confidence nor the desire to move on as a doctor.. preparing for civil services more..

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