Midnight Thoughts

Midnight Thoughts

A Poem by Jemima Laing

 I miss the sound of your voice

And the feel of your hair

I don’t have enough sense to

Move on and get on with my life

I miss the sound of your laugh

And the conversations we shared

I have the sense to realize that I

Don’t know how to let you go

 

I see other girls who walk pretty

With nice flowing long hair

And I feel the spark of something

Stirring deep in my heart and mind

I start to think, maybe she’s the one

But in the end it never works out

Because she’s not you

And I can't help but compare

 

And I think of you when no one else is around

I think of you, whenever my feet touch the ground

Pulled back to earth by your gravity

My thoughts pulled inevitably back into orbit

Around you and what we used to be

© 2009 Jemima Laing


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This poem i really admire ,suddenly when i started reading it i felt inspired to write my own .But keep up the good work i enjoyed reading the poem and at the same time i felt reborn cause i went through somthing like the way you described.

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Added on November 28, 2009
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Jemima Laing
Jemima Laing

El Verano, CA



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Not much to say. I tend to be influenced by whatever music I am listening to. I also miss-spell many words. My passions include massive amounts of reading and fencing. I do tend break out in song rand.. more..

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