Gaze

Memorize me
drink in every orifice of my being
let it beat persistantly against your eyelids
with it's inky shadow covering your face
have you Forgiven me yet? I need you to...

I grow weary of beating against you
trying to pound into your soul
open those muddy eyes of yours 
let me dive into the pupil
like the sun getting sucked into a black hole
this vacuum of you

Well secluded in the forest of lashes
I wait for my opportunity to pounce
for you to Awaken
and let me in
so I can get you to remember
what the past sung of, and desires to sing again

If it takes Forever for Forgiveness 
I will wait, still secluded...
enjoying your deep breathing, the rise and fall
of your lonely heart

Still praying you never Forget me...

Reviews

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Very meaningful. Good write!

[Dove]

Beautiful work!!!, great job.

[Luke Ritta]

very good poem...great work!

[bob, small b. aka invs]

very nice. a wish for some sort of resolve. loose ends can be so hard to deal with. your use of capital letters was interesting in this.

[Nath]

This is really good, well written, very meaningful.
I like it :-)