I wanna escape...

I don't wanna listen to any bad spoken about you,

i want you just in my arms and make myself feel fine!

i wanna escape...

escape somewhere far!

i don't wanna see tears and rage in your eyes so i keep quiet,

not saying you a word of what i listen!

my head aches and my eyes fill with tears..

i wanna escape..

escape somewhere far!

i miss you each time,

and hope for your return...

just a return to make me fine!

i wanna escape..

escape somewhere far!

people talk about you,

and i just can't do anything but listen to it...

baby, i love you so much...

and even after all the gossips,

i search in you only the good!

because the day i started loving you,

i forgot all your bad....

Reviews

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Escape is within us. Try to feel the space between your ribs. You'll find space. Big enough for you to escape and fine solace. Escape is only a figment of our own thought and desire. Caress it. :)

Good one, yet again.

[Abhishek Asthana]

its a painful and pinching for someone when this kind of situation arises,,, when he is bound to live in place which is no more pleasant for him just because of other voice echoes... very nicely penned it wajiha...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much abhi!

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked and I understood this poem. Sometime we need a new place. To escape. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you Wajiha for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much....

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[Psychotic Lily]

Nice one!
Loving the person is to see the goodness in them. Love it!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much lily!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good views, beautifully written Wajiha..

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much farhan...

[Zephyr]

Its an emotional poem
Its the power of 💘 that makes us see the good side...
Ignoring the bad side won't be good either.
A well expressed poem,Wajiha...☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much dear!

[Najam Us Saher]

Another well written poem. I agree with your views. I really liked this.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much najam!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome.

[Priyanshi]

When we love someone, what we see is only their good qualities,all the bad deeds are ignored by us.
Can't listen anything bad about them....'cos we love them....Good poem,Wajiha.

[Surya]

That's what love is....we cannot seee any good or bad from them, we just love them....I loved it...:)

[Rassoul]

We notice our loved one's flaws but we always ignore it.
Such an amazing poem, Wajiha!