Never!

when we are tired of doing everything and anything for our beloved ones and in return we get nothing but just pain...hatred and hopelessness!...then this is all that happens!

She sat all alone..with a book in her hand and a pen...she wanted to write down something, maybe her feelings!

well, though she was all tired and she gave up herself, nobody cared what she was going through or what she wanted to share!!...

it went on for days and then months and then years passed by, but she was left alone!!....She had a beautiful and loving family but, she was alone...ALONE!

Her hopes were all lost and every time.

She was betrayed.....she smiled to hide her fears and pain...but,only her Lord knew her problems and she always prayed to him for the thing she didn't get...

She was hurt, lost, broken and betrayed...but, she was a strong girl...though she had lost all hopes, she made herself a girl with honesty, love and respect...

but, now!

She thinks...She'll never fall in LOVE again!

Reviews

[Pegster]

I think this would be great if you lost the ! and the caps. Let the words do the expressing..

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much for the suggestion..

[Nora]

Omg why's this so relatable! 😢 especially the first section 💔💔 this so soulful poem ❤

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much...this is relatable because a broken person can only understand a broken person and yes, it's directly from the heart!...that's the main reason.

[Nora]

Yeah, so true 😢💔

[Najam Us Saher]

Always give love a chance and if you don't want to just leave it on faith...I can relate to this...For a minute I felt like you have written this for me...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

haha...thank you so much saher...glad you could relate to this!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like this. Although it hints more at hopelessness and despair in the start but I like that you ended it with a hopeful note...
I do think never falling in love is just an illusion 'cause there really is no guarantee that you won't...
An honest expression of thoughts, well penned.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you sooo much yumna...glad you liked it!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

you're welcome :)

[Surya]

Life is all about ups and downs dear, as soon as you get this formula you will lead an adventurous and a beautiful life.....Loving is not a crime and inturn you should never expect anything, it's their choice and we cannot force everyone rite....As some gentlemen said love is maid in heaven....may be your heaven is on your way....just smile and let it happens whatever going....I loved it...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks su...i hope the wounds heal...

[Surya]

it will...

[Zephyr]

I can so totally relate.
Well expressed story Wajiha:)
Great work

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much naat!!

[Zephyr]

My pleasure

[Priyanshi]

True feeling , very well portrayed in the piece...
that happens, when we fell in love and the person doesn't feel the same for us..........but staying at a place hurts us more....so moving on is better.......aboveall i loved your story....keep it up, dear friend.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much....

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

It's really hard when someone we love refuses to love us. That's how life it is and we have to move on.I could clearly see this message in your story. Well written. Keep it up

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much.....glad you liked it!

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

You're welcome