Motivate yourself through!

Lean not so much,

let yourself not fall..

keep surprising yourself,

but, never keep the dreams you dreamt down for long...!

keep riding,

let not yourself stop...

the spark,

let it burn a little...

the fire then starts!

stay wide awake,

keep no regrets...

deep down there is nothing,

high up there lies your mission...!

make it a point,

if you stand alone,

fear not, of any difficulty....

just stand bold!

stand ahead,

keep your head high,

but, yes my dear,

show no pride!.

Reviews

[Farhan Shaikh]

Motivation is never far away from your pen Wajiha..good write

[Wajiha Nayeem]

woho....u made my day farhan...thanks so much.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Ur welcome ☺

[Zoya]

Ah, I love the last stanza. Well...I guess...'arrogance' would have been a better word there, in place of pride...but, that's fine too. Talking about the poem, it was indeed inspiring. Wise words...keep writing!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much zoe....am glad you did suggest me with a word instead and thanks dear for reviewing and liking my work.

[Zoya]

You're most welcome

[Hari Om]

Of wonderful times..
Tale you tell
Wht an amazing expressiom loved it

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahah...thanks om!

[Priyanshi]

Hey, that's like my friend....it's an inspiring poem....I really loved it so much....I'll waiting to read other such motivating poems...so keep on writing and smile...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much priyu.....i will surely write more of them.

[Priyanshi]

You're most welcome, dear....always a pleasure.

[Zephyr]

This is very motivating Wajiha:)
I agree with your last stanza very much:)
Keep writing dear!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much....glad you loved it naat!

[Zephyr]

My pleasure:)

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

keep riding,
let not yourself stop...
the spark,
let it burn a little...
the fire then starts!

I loved this part. Nice one, Wajha.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

heheh..thanks dear.

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

You are welcome

[Abhishek Asthana]

such an inspiring piece after long duration...it's good to see you that you are writing such stuff,,, so nicely written...great work wajiha :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks abhi..yes, i wrote a motivational piece after a long time...

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom shared.
"stand ahead,
keep your head high,
but, yes my dear,
show no pride!."
I agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much coyote...am really happy that you reviewed!!.....thanks again.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Carol Cashes]

"...but, yes my dear, show no pride!" Excellent lead-in to the very real struggle of women everywhere. I really liked this and until I joined this site was not a real reader and certainly not a critic of poetry. I'm learning, and the good ones are really inspiring me to take a shot at it. Well done.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks so much Carol..thanks for the kind visit...and the encouraging review...

[Mr.Writer]

Well said and explained! Right on the point, and engaging as well!
Keep it up

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much Shaan!!

[Mr.Writer]

no problem :)