Holds....

My heart holds beneath,

A million unsaid feelings.....

Reviews

[The Exiled Wolf]

This piece is short and concise (and I guess I spotted a hint of humor in it). The ellipsis is just the right thing to put there to illustrate the short two lines. The unsaid remains unsaid. Thanks for sharing!

[Accalia]

Short and straight to the point.. I like it, keep up the good work!

[Donicca Dona L]

those unsaid feelings are the worst.

great one

[Wajiha Nayeem]

yess...
thanks dear!

[Coyote Poetry]

You said everything needed in the short poetry. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thanks to uh for loving my work and encouraging me to write more.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[rowan.taylorrr]

short but true. i have to say

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much lovely..

[Priyanshi]

Some feelings can't be expressed..and some we don't want to express....loved the lines.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Thanks so muchh

[Zephyr]

I can relate well Wajiha:)
Simple yet to the point!
Great work:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you soo much naat!

[pragya gaur]

Really a nice one......But a line more should be added

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much....

[Zoya]

Very relatable...well said

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hey..thanks dear!

[Zoya]

No worries

[Sofia]

Yeah, even I think the same, that it would be a perfect haiku if you add a line.. you're really good at short poems/quotes..and it's not an easy task..keep writing more.. :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much dear!!

[Sofia]

My pleasure :)