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I want to let go,
I want fall down,
All the way to the bottom of the sea.
I want to just stop,
Stop this pain.
Stop all my friends,
From going on their way.
A new party tonight,
Where another is likely to,
Gain the same fate,
As the millions before him.
I want no more deaths,
To darken this world,
I want see no more,
Tearstreaked faces.
I don't want to have,
Anothers blood on my hands.
Death is heavy in the air,
And theres nothing I can do.

That's the worst part,
Watching these people suffer.
Death after death,
Knowing I can't do a thing to stop it.
Maybe I could,
Stop a few,
But honestly?
I gave up a long time ago.
What was the point?
I wasn't getting anywhere,
I have to get out of this town.
Out of this place,
Out of this world.
And hope there is somewhere,
Anywhere, better than this.

Reviews

[Gavin Keary]

This is very very good writing, sir or madam. lol. It truly conveys the sense of freedom that you desire.