Where do I go from here

Where are you going my love?  may I come with you? I don't care where, I just want to be in your presence. 

Oh no!  You fool! you stupid selfish fool! You may not come with me. Can't you see I am trying run away from you. I hate you! No, loathe you. 

But my love, does not The Lord himself forgive when repentance is asked for? Have I not offered up many of sacrifices to show true repentance? Have I not slaved over fire and worked until my toes and hands went numb? Haven't I walked with you through valleys high and low? 

No you fool! you were never there for me! You idiot! I carried myself. You are weak and disgusting. You are worthless! cowardly! pathetic and useless. Your sorry's are empty. You have done nothing but destroy my life. You make me sick! You have no place in my heart anymore. Keep your distance now. That is the least you can do. 

                                         ...... Love fades..... Love disappears......

I am now alone. Completely alone. I have no one. My Love as abandoned me. No amount of repentance and sacrifice can repair. 

Where do I go from here?

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Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

For my taste, I'd like to know a little more about the two voices in order to form some kind of context. It needs a bit of editing, but is overall quite good.