Love

Something About Love

the feeling of love is intense
the passion itself is so immense that no man nor woman can deny it

when two souls meet each other
their body don't speak their heart does

with each an every kiss
they speak out their heart's content

the feeling is something very beautiful
i don't think so there are any words to define it

what i am feeling right now
is that my heart is being written on this page

that smile of her's
brings me the heaven closer

inch by inch i feel her breath
as i look into her eyes i could see the flood of emotions floating waiting
to be rescued :)

her hair just as the darkest of the nights
her lips red as wine
her body shining bright underneath the pure moon light
oh what a sight

holding her closer to me as i open her slowly
her nails pulsing down my arm

and i...i think...i know so
that i am in love...

Author's Note

something new because i wanted to change what i write :)

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

excellent sonnet to the love of your life. your love for her is very intense. you're a lucky guy to have found someone who makes you feel all of those things. great poem.

[MOON]

This is an excellent poem .

[Lilmissfit]

this is a very beautiful poem, you can practically feel the peace, love, harmony humming through each written word. amazing write :)

[Humor Me]

thank you so much !! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem of love. I like the description of the emotion of love and good memories. Love is a set of steps where we open doors that will never be closed. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote