dreams

Some people say that dreams cant come true

They say that dreams can be seen right through

I say if you believe hard enough

You can do all kinds of stuff

So dont listen to what they say

Just go ahead with your day

I promise if you try your dreams will come true

And then what will those people do

Author's Note

just be honest on what you think

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

a nice poem with a nice message
its refreshing to read something positive as they are more rare in the writers world
thank you for entering my contest

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A very good point delicately made. Best wishes, Pammy

[Kristine]

this poem was enjoyable.
sounds like it came from the heart.
i too like to write with rhyme.
it can be difficult to not make it sound cheesey.
keep on writing, i'm sure you'll get better.

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I loved it....It flowed easily and it is also true! Is this how you feel or is this fiction? I loved how you just told off allthe people that don't believe that dreams do come true....Great right all i suggest is that you chang "Cat" to "Can't" :)