the one i missed

the one i missed

A Poem by eddie

the gentle brezze blows through her hair

he laughs and tells her they are the perfect pair

i look at them with envy and wonder

where we went under

could i have saved the thing we had

you said no it was just to bad

i wonder what i did to you

and then i remeber what i put you through

it just wasn't meant to be

you and me

you turn to walk away

i ask you to stay

to give me one last chance

you just keeping walking your path

 

© 2008 eddie


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eddie
ok i really dont think this one is that great but i guess you people will tell me

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Self observation is courageous eddie - no regrets just lessons on which new road to travel...

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 17, 2008

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eddie
eddie

barberton, OH



About
im not the greatest writer... but i want homest opinions of what you think more..

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L.O.V.E. L.O.V.E.

A Poem by eddie