Simply Beautiful

Well I think your fascinating, not 

because your logic ties my

tongue in knots. It's the way

you find everything that

surrounds you remarkable.

You analyze the components

that are responsible for creating

such beautiful things

and you share it with

the world. 

Your eyes capture the

hidden desires that

lurk deep within you. 

So no, your logic

is not what draws 

me to you. 

It's the way your 

eyes capture

everything that

is simple, yet lovely

in every aspect.

Reviews

[Cory Barrett]

such a lovely ideas of falling in love with someone, simply because they pay attention. I suppose really this is the reason we all fall in love in the first place. Really great piece

[Sami Khalil]

"Your eyes capture the
hidden desires that
lurk deep within you.
So no, your logic
is not what draws
me to you.
It's the way your
eyes capture
everything that
is simple, yet lovely
in every aspect."

[Sami Khalil]

A lovely poem indeed. Thank you for sharing...:).......................