Senseless Mind

I see you, walking right before my eyes.

I hear you, speak lines,

I smell your scent, fragrance from those lonely nights

I tasted your cakes, sweetness of a birthday present

an  overwhelming  touches, behind my spines.

 

figuring melodies, on songs unsung

harmonies on those guitar strings

strum the golden memories, the sound of your voice, 

entrapped air inside my lungs

 

you define the process of sugarcane to sugar dust,

an enchantress, enchanted  busting magical dust.

you devoured me, from my crust to the deepest of my core

filled me with water, leave me here, drown my soul

fly my kite, so you would see an elevating paper unfold.

now tell me is this a story untold? 

 

cold nights on a lonely friday eve. 

bird on a cage slowly be freed.

a content of a scripture, unreleased

greeting cards  from a cold october breeze

wind blowing, wind pipes.

flutes tuned to dumbfounded trumpets. paintings on my room.

a picture on my walls, a photo of you.

 

then time fly so fast  it had been years and months

I forgot things beyond my control,

and I realized that...

 

 

I was blind, to see the  picture

I was deaf, to hear the music,

I was mute, to speak the context

I had hyposmia, to smell your fragrance

my toungue's, to short to taste your actions

I was numb, to feel your touches 

 

 

yet you are still there

not leaving...

being My Senses...

 

 

thank you.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems. :)

Reviews

[C.C. Marx]

Soooo good! Great detail!

[Wem Ortiz]

thanks sir! appreciate it :)

[C.C. Marx]

umm awkward I'm a female and a young one at that lol

[Wem Ortiz]

ohhh sorry about that, my bad hahaha, thought you were a guy :D

[C.C. Marx]

No prob, it happens....i guess lol well when i read it i started laughing hysterically

[Wem Ortiz]

hahahha :D geez. hopefully you didn't roll down laughing haha

[C.C. Marx]

ummmm...well...let's just say i got a couple weird looks from my friends lol :)

[Wem Ortiz]

hahaha well that's funny

[C.C. Marx]

Well no worries cuz that pretty much made my day, which is weird, but it was just too funny

[Wem Ortiz]

okay" SIR" if that made your day haha

[C.C. Marx]

it did lol that is the first time that has ever happened to me

[Wem Ortiz]

haha glad to hear that i was the first haha

[C.C. Marx]

no offense, but hopefully your also the last

[Wem Ortiz]

i don't know whats that suppose to mean but yeah sir lol haha

[C.C. Marx]

hopefully your the last person to call me a man

[Wem Ortiz]

hahaha if there was only a face on that clouds then it would be a lot more easier to define a gender :D

[C.C. Marx]

Well you should never assume all soccer players are boys! let that be a lesson to you!

[Wem Ortiz]

yup knew that, but for my mistake at least
for a bit you smiled :D

[C.C. Marx]

good point lol but being a die-hard soccer fan i'm still slightly offended

[Wem Ortiz]

you don't have too :) I'm sorry hehe

[C.C. Marx]

its fine soccer is mostly played by guys anyways