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TS might not be Frost or Eliot but combined with Nix they made music. Perhaps another colab?...


A Poem by carmen

I didn't mean to blame you

for everything thats wrong

I'm sitting here and wondering

why you've been gone so long


I want to take you by the hand

and take away the pain

I need you here, by my side

has my love been in vain?


please don't do something stupid

you were in such a state

please come home so we can talk

it's getting on so late


The phone has gone

I hear your voice

you make it clear

you've made your choice


I cry in silence

mourn the loss of you and me

but I can't accept

that it wasn't meant to be


So I'll continue fighting

I will make you see

despite everything I put you through

we're perfect you and me



© 2008 carmen

Author's Note

this is from the heart so just read it as such

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I really like this. It's actually really... im not sure... whole. Kinda perfect in it's own sad way. But yeah, keeping fighting for what you truly want. What's that saying.. "never give up on something you cant go a day without thinking about".... I think thats it. Good poem!

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Added on July 10, 2008



Carlisle, England

I am a student mental health nurse who writes in my spare time. I write anything and everything that comes to mind, poems, stories, songs and i often just write down my thoughts and feelings about thi.. more..

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