He and She

He and She

A Poem by Whitney

Her heart beats quickly, and it beats red wine.

His breathing slows, and he inhales her scent.

She drinks him in with her midnight eyes.

He hears her sigh from his gentle kiss.

Her skin rises with chills, and she giggles.

His brow glistens with sweat, and he smiles.

She lets her slender fingers dance with his.

He lets his lips delicately touch her forehead.

Her thoughts scatter to the far reaches of the universe.

His words scramble until he is a stuttering mess.

She hears the music in his rich, velvety laugh.

He sees the magic in her deep, mystic eyes.

Her eyes scream her love for him to the stars.

His eyes proclaim his love for her to her soul.

She tries to speak, but no words form.

He tries to speak, but his voice cracks.

Her world stops, and she goes in reverse.

His world stops, but he has to move forward.

She says -- I miss you -- with tears tears in her eyes.

He say -- I love you -- to the ghost of his wife.

© 2015 Whitney


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"Her heart beats quickly, and it beats red wine.
His breathing slows, and he inhales her scent.
She drinks him in with her midnight eyes.
He hears her sigh from his gentle kiss."
Seductive and sultry writing but I love the first stanza. You have created a passionate work here. Good Job!

~Rob~

Posted 8 Years Ago


Whitney

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your review.
ha!!!! this is PERFECT! !
not expecting that

Posted 8 Years Ago


Whitney

8 Years Ago

Thank you haha!
love this work.... you are an awsome writer !!!!!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Whitney

8 Years Ago

Aww thank you so much!

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Added on October 29, 2015
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Whitney
Whitney

Boston, MA



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