Burning Fire

Burning Fire

A Poem by Ryan Daniels

As I fall to my knees

I plead to peel 

From the fire that burns 

And there is no where to turn

But to the heavens above

Asking for the cup

That is full of mercy.

As I cry

My soul dives

In the ocean

Of forgiveness

Short as it may be

Life is full of dreams.

The reality of your burdens

Are free when you think



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A wonderful write... It flows wonderfully well...The torment is described in compelling words.. "I plead to peel from the fire that burns..wow!
As I cry my soul dives into the ocean of forgiveness...such a brilliant way of expressing the grant of salvation...and it has such a useful message at the end...
The reality of your burdens
Are free when you think
Precious words of wisdom..great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


Life is so complex, the ultimate novel taking place around us. We have so many trials and a choice of how our story goes and how it ends in this grand work of prose comprised of our life. Some answers we never know, some we would rather not know, in the end it will be as it should. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Amazing poem

Posted 12 Years Ago

We all have our burdens. They are little, most times, tests of our strength. I know sometimes I think to myself, how many tests do I have to pass before I finally understand? Only we can know the answer to that question.
nice piece of writing here

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely lesson to be learned here. Kudos on such an uplifting and succinct write!

Posted 12 Years Ago

I love the last three lines

Posted 12 Years Ago

this Beautiful poem makes the spirit and mind feel free as a bird so Beautiful made me tear up and lovely Touch with music adds that missing Piece to teh poem Just Lovely thank you for sharing this is going to my favorites also. God bless

Posted 12 Years Ago

I love this :) It flows really well. Beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Your words are wise. We must forgive our self and others to be able to move on. We need to stay positive and try to live a good life. A outstanding poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love it, beautiful, it flows so well.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on June 3, 2010
Last Updated on June 8, 2010
Tags: Poetry


Ryan Daniels
Ryan Daniels


I am a poet that likes to write about spirituality that is up lifting to the heart. I have published two poetry books! I read books from the Baha'i Faith because I am a Baha'i and enjoy creating in th.. more..


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