Making Love

CopyRight of Whitevampire1184/Cal Vance Poems @2008

"Making Love"

Written By.Cal Vance

 

She is so precious

So sweet

And everytime we make love

My heart pumps harder and harder

 

Loving her everyday is beautiful

Watching her smile at you

Is pure romance

She is pure and sweet

 

When we are making love

She winks at me

I wink at her

She grabs my hand

And

We make love!

Reviews

[Courtney Lou]

Ugh! The last stanza was, boring. Were's the emotion?! Were are the raw feelings of love?! Your thinking too much. Just write!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Lauren Burch]

so pure is this love you have. :)

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Well, you go, buddy! New love feels good, doesn't it? Like new underwear! haha It just fits so gooood and it feels so clean, tight, and perfectly form fitting! Yeah, new love is like new underwear! :)