I thought it was him.

It all happened one day..

Although it was for a meer second

I swore it was you.

In that second a million thoughts

ran through my mind.

My heart stopped and I couldn't

breathe. Then the second was gone.

And there I stood alone and broken.

Reviews

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Oh Yes!!
I Know This Poetic Express Indeed!
Especially the holding the breath
for The Hope of that second
Love Love Love Always there
Always peeking in seconds here & there
then also......

"Then the second was gone.

And there I stood alone and broken."

Your Last Words A Just BEAUTIFUL!!"

Embrasse'
Vickie

[Nicholas Hallows]

I really like this poem. You manage to capture this experience perfectly.

[nineteenminutes]

Naw,
I really enjoyed reading this.
Totally gonna remember your writing for more stuff
=)