The Sharing

The Sharing

A Poem by Doug Ordunio
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conjoined relationship

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We are like Siamese twins joined at the heart

And we are now separated

We are not an entire person unless we are together

For then our heart is whole

When we are apart, there is this gentle constant pulling

We must talk to bring each other solace and assurance

When we are close, we are mute

There is only desire to fully enjoy

The rich comfortable silence

© 2010 Doug Ordunio


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Absolutely beautiful.
Amazing imagery.

Posted 13 Years Ago


That's what it's like being seperated from your life partner. It's like being without an arm or a leg. You've lost an essential part of your being. Beautiful poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love is a beautiful and wonderous thing when in full bloom, your poem expresses it well, a lovely poem that says much in just a few words, bravo

Posted 13 Years Ago


Now I like this idea. Two lovers who must talk to each other when they are separated, but when they are together there is no need for words. That sounds too good to be true. Is there a couple like that?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on December 14, 2010
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Tags: Siamese, connection, severing, parted

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Doug Ordunio
Doug Ordunio

Tujunga, CA



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