Proud Peacock

Flashy little man
Proud
Tall
Puffy little man
frail and small

Strutting about
He owns the place
The world is his stage

Strutting little man
Flaunt it all
sad little man
Lost it all

The world is full of proud peacocks
big and small
Proud strutting peacocks
One and all

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

I agree, lovely flow.

I love how you put the font in blue to match the peacocks. I thought that was a very nice touch.

I agree with you about how the world is full of proud peacocks.

Keep up the awesome work:)

[M Garcia]

good flow