A dot on Earth

A poem

Said were these words, “ A dot we are”;

On Earth of all the mighty god,

Our struggles, feelings, laughs and pain,

They are but dust in bigger game.

 

Agree to this is rather hard,

We people have our story cut.

Our happiness, our laughs, and pain,

Mean life to some, to some it’s lame.

 

And yet we live, with this in heart,

As there’s no hope without this fact.

Reviews

[girlandpen]

Our struggles, feelings, laughs and pain,
They are but dust in bigger game.

I love these lines!

Some of the words in here seem more like almost-rhymes so I don't know if you're trying to rhyme or not... but overall the message is great and keep writing!!