rewrite of my road to nowhare

not tweeked all the way yet

I travel this road

an eternity it seems

with no one near to hear my sceams

With but the windblown sand to remind me im alone

and the pain of my tattered leggs

and my shaterd bones

This road o this road

 will u finally be

the end of me

Will my body fall

 yet another mael

 another victom

of this endless desert sand

For my corpse to rot in the blistering sun

Or to be shredded by the lurking vultures

This road o lonely road

My path to such a desolate fate

Ware only darkness and destruction cross my path

And such heavy chains that bind me

and drag me to this broken fate

My hands stained crimson

with the blood of the innocent

My close picked to shreds

by the claws of the desert

The crusted dirt on my skin

to shield me from the night

With nothing but the long dried blood on my lips to quench my thirst

Yet still I walk this road

Author's Note

unfinisedf and still tweeking

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Very good

[Kimberly Smith]

NICELY DONE
My hands stained crimson

with the blood of the innocent
THAT line is soooo dope...keep it up man