My love, My all

    The first time i met u

 I felt the connection,

    and every second since then,

there's been nothing short of perfection.

    I adore every section that comprises 

you, it's like your an angel disguised 

    as you.

Mesmerized every time that i view,

your undeniable kindness that shines 

    from inside of you.

    My eyes stay glued with your every chance

of moving, 

I glance at your enchanting beauty

    there's no need to ruin.

 

you've got a smile so 

soothing and a sweetness like peaches,

 that reaches

    deep in my soul as my feelings increases,

 

I'll try  to mend all the pieces of a heart been mistreated,

    don't have me like the others

 the past won't be repeated.

    I will erase the bad and replace it with good,

help you escape from the pain like a real man would.

let's escape these pains and 

    disperse to good.

                                                                                      

Tevin Smith 

                                                                            

Author's Note

this came from the heart

Reviews

[Suavis_Umbra]

Amazing!

[Tevin Smith]

thank you

[Sakshi]

Free flow, and sincere emotions...
Delightful read!

Cheers!

[Tevin Smith]

thank you i wrote that for a girl once

[Tevin Smith]

lol well the difference is the person didn't write a poem to you lol

[Tevin Smith]

lol i'm just saying sorry if i hurt your feelings

[Tevin Smith]

personal stuff i get you lol you can stop

[Seraph]

nice use of words

[Tevin Smith]

thank you

[Seraph]

you're welcome