"Decoys"

Just a poem.

They are all so infuriated but I have no patience

 giving in to these temptations

 think about all the troubles i will be facing not concentrating

on my life the pain it smolders me to my heart it holds the knife

and its hard to think about the sun when its always stormy outside

I give you trust and I confide till im provoked I and I collide

cant keep these feelings all inside I get moonstruck  and paranoid

 just cant fill the void when im surrounded by all these decoys

 

Reviews

[Twizzler]

I guess I realize now what kind of temptations you were talking about giving into.....that's sick! The void you feel is because you know you're not living right. You have to face yourself each day knowing the things you have done. Don't pretend that you aren't empty inside.

[Echoes of Eros]

You split open your heart and mind and lay them out for all to see. Here the hidden things are distracted by the false, and we grasp at what is truly real.

[Twizzler]

Not sure what kind of "temptations" you're giving into but it's a sign of weakness.

[Twizzler]

This is an interesting piece. Clever how you put it together, it's so much more than just the surface value. Each time I read through it I realized something else.