Bring Back

Your the one who brings my smile back...

The one that I love...

I don;t know though...

If you feel the same

Or if I just am imagining things....

 

It started off as just fiends

I barely knew you

and you barely knew me

But you left

And I got lost.

 

The days slowely passed

And I slowely got my heart back

And you became the least of my worries

But I was left missing something

No one was there to make me smile...

 

You finally came back though

And my smile came back

I missed you...

But I knew you would go away again

So I wouldn't get my hopes up

 

I slowely began to realise

That you were the one person

Who could make me truely happy

But...

I don't think you feel the same...

 

Hopefully

One day I can tell you what you do to me

But till I can...

I'll be waithing

FOr you to bring back my smile.

 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh wow.. the emotions felt for the way some one lifts you.. the saga of them leaving (like not knowing what you got til it's gone just not intimately yet)... seeing them again and the sparks igniting through just a smile.. It can be so hard to know with just a smile what others feel towards others.. sometimes even hints are not enough.. your last stanza really touched me:

Hopefully
One day I can tell you what you do to me
But till I can...
I'll be waithing
For you to bring back my smile.

I'm not grading this on grammar but the high emotions in creativity you have pouring forth.. very well-penned!