Springtime Renewal

Springtime Renewal

A Poem by words a la carte

The trees have forgotten Winter's harsh breaths
The grass whispers of life renewed.
The sky sheds her veil of mourning
The sun rejoices in his freedom
Spring.

© 2012 words a la carte


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words a la carte
This was actually written for a school assignment. But it's my favorite poem I've written.

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Your poem is pleasant, peaceful and enjoyable. In simple sentences you convey images of nature which we all hold dear. I don't know if that was your intention, but the sentence length starts long and ends very short, making it visually interesting. You might even make the middle sentences gradually shorter, in a more even curve; or not. Keep on writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Your poem is pleasant, peaceful and enjoyable. In simple sentences you convey images of nature which we all hold dear. I don't know if that was your intention, but the sentence length starts long and ends very short, making it visually interesting. You might even make the middle sentences gradually shorter, in a more even curve; or not. Keep on writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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