Simple

Simple

A Poem by words a la carte
"

Simple things.

"

The sound of a curtain flapping in the wind

The bright blue sky outside her door

The scent of freshly mowed grass

A day just like many others.

But so beautiful in its own simple way.


The brush of a mother's loving hand across her hair

The swell of emotions within her heart

The way her steps falter on the aisle.

A girl just like many others.

But so unique in her own simple way.


The weight of a ring on her finger

The shine of a diamond as it catches the light

The warmth of his hand on hers

A scene like many others.

But the story is simply their own.

© 2012 words a la carte


Author's Note

words a la carte
Written for my cousin's wedding which is rapidly approaching.

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cleverly constructed and wonderfully expressive and simple in delivery. a very nice tribute to your cousin's wedding. very nice write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Simply beautiful! The structure and scheme is very nice and attractive. I'd prefer the very last line to match lines 5 and 10 in structure, but that's just me being nitpicky.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was a nice poem! However, I do have to point out that at the end of the first stanza, "it's" shouldn't have an apostraphe. Also, isn't it freshly mown grass instead of mowed? But I liked all the imagery. Good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nicely done!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on June 13, 2012
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