Flashy metal

Greed and ignorance

Flashy metal,

Bright white cloth,

Billows of smoke,

Without a thought.

Internal satisfaction,

External deprivation,

Happy pocket,

For greater exultation.

Marriage to money,

Love of course,

That's life,

Without remorse.

Sacred cares,

Time of being,

Semi-detached,

Better scene.

Reviews

[Inda]

There's a lot of imagery here and a lot being said in a short piece. The end seems rather soft or i guess detached, it just has an uneasy or abrupt feel to it. either way it is a very engaging piece that speak volumes of greed and ignorance running rampant and how it is part of every aspect of the culture.