Quiet Word

what makes you make a decision? how hard is it to say a quiet word?

 

How do you make a decision

When all the derision around you

Sprinkles everything with chaos?

 

When monotony reigns

And conformity is law

 

When everything has a place

Is never out of place

And stuck there

 

Unmoving

Callous

Apathetic to all

And all are apathetic

 

If we were all meant to be one

And change was never to come

Then what would one difference make

 

One change

One word

 

No 

 

Author's Note

why conformity is bad because there are flaws with agreeing.

Reviews

[DanaRegen]

speak for yourself, dont be quite, and make your own decisions based on yourself, who you are. Speak the truth loudly not 1 quite word, 3 or 4, make that word words make it louder, turn it into a voice.

[Somebody you've already..]

well one word probably would make a difference, but alot of words would too. the same thing w/ actions.

[Lori]

I love how the poem starts with the chaos and indecision and ends with such decisiveness. It sort feels like it breaks through the clutter of the mind and brings everything to a deicisive end. Well done!

[Emmie]

This is actually a pretty strong piece with a great. This is a poem that clearly shows how nothing is perfect, and not to conform to the majority rule. Great read =)