Rain, Rain Worries Away

Rain, Rain Worries Away

A Poem by fallendemonofmercy
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a little something for those who rush through, as though impatient to die.

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Why are you rushing?
Why not go slow?
You enter life bustling
And know not where to go
 
Stop, think,
Look around for a change
At the beautiful day
We are having
Today
 
As clear as it is sunny
Low clouds dark, dulled grey
You would never have noticed
As you continued your day
The approaching storm
That was coming to
Play
 
Until, alas you got caught in the rain
The cool, soothing rain
How that would’ve ruined most peoples day
 
Enjoy the moment
Live a little
Free your worries
 
And let the rain wash your
Worries away

© 2009 fallendemonofmercy


Author's Note

fallendemonofmercy
why hurry when you can enjoy where you are and what's happening - the angrier you get, the shorter your life. the faster your eart beats, the quicker it stops
trust me - stop, think, live


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I have always liked this theme... And am in love with the way you used rain.
The approaching storm
That was coming to
Play
What a brilliant string of words... Something about using rain for the task of appreciating what is beautiful, was so much more eloquent than the easy decision of sun... Pleasure to read :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


your a wonderful poet keep up the good work. And in need wash your worries away and let your hopes control your interists, and poems, keep up the good work and thanks for sharing your poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Told you I would be back...and I enjoyed this as well...I do so enjoy the rain!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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