Cry

what happens when you get in too deep and you can't take it

 

 

I cry for you

Fight for you

Love to hate you

Hate that I love you

 

You’re my drug

An ongoing fixation

Sometimes a tyrannical thug

I’m often left in desperation

 

I can’t help it

It’s true

So cut the s**t

I want more of you  

 

But you deny me

Degrade me

Capture me

And won’t set me free

 

Now I see

That you were a mistake

And the way out I seek

I must take

 

I feel the blade

Icy cold serrated edge at my throat

My pulse grows strong, fails to fade

I gasp at the chill, try not to choke

 

A crash from behind

Sends my mind reeling

I turn, can’t believe my eyes

You are there, running…trying to stop me

 

The tip grazes

Bites my neck

Blood gushes

My match is met

 

My final hours

Have come to an end

You catch me in your arms

Never defeated, ever spent

 

I look into your eyes

The anguish surprises me  

You begin to cry, hug me tight

And set me free

 

I give you a smile

And close my eyes

And fly away…

 

At last

 

Author's Note

3/10/09

Reviews

[Sad Penguin]

I really and truly enjoyed reading this.

I love the imagery, its very vivid.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work! :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Wow so sad...its a very good poem.
Great Job

[..R.I.P..]

WOW! There isn't anything else I can say....I'm addicted to cutting(I'm working on that) and this just brought out sooo much of my past.....I really enjoyed this piece, there is soooo much raw emotion in this. There's also excellent imagery. I loved this piece. I'm going to add it to my favorites in my library, that's how much I love it.

Thanks for sharing.

[Wellokay]

Thats soo good. Really intense

[Voice]

Such a powerful write. So raw and tense with emotion I love it you're a great writer...

Voice

[Changed to a New Accoun..]

again amazing poem... and i can really relate to it ^.^

[theperfectfit]

Beautiful and met with a tragic ending. I enjoyed this a lot. Lots of vivid emotions here. Well done :))

[The High Poet]

Wow.... I don't know what else to say. Being a recovering addict it brought out a ton of emotion for me. I really enjoyed reading it. I actually read it twice I loved it so much. Thanks for sharing :)

The High Poet