DOING TIME ON THE WRITERS BLOCK

DOING TIME ON THE WRITERS BLOCK

A Poem by writing mojo
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a poem about the influences of having writers block

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Doing time on the writers block

headaches scalp the physical description

    my fingers

intellectualize

skimming

  dead ends

passion, plays

like

hieroglyphic rain  

drying out  

a visual age  

as

 mood swings balance a practice 

 mapping  evidence, 

creating  madness 

like

the way 

 you see the creases on the paper


a face value 

with elbow shadows

on the desk

together, they form a riddle before light was ever discovered  


 ghost  writing

 insomnia

 the phantom ties to the lost lover  

where again

 you can break even with past 


remember your heart can only beat 30 words per second


 learning fate tricks against  tree skin

 

 stone-coma epitaphs

    never written in 


I feel empathy

in telepathic stanzas

   a victim style


that's my eye

  witness testimony  

enraging  the nostalgia, blood lead now and then   

 

writing  the mind crime  stationary

  penmen-ship  between my head  

exposing the tissue  desire read

 

 the instinctual  reminders make the scar it takes to be remembered 


bang

a thought

there it is?


let it ring in metaphors through me 

the meaning 

seen through an angel's envy

wings speed

a verbal error

 free of an extending consequence

 craning the light off my head

into a second

 

subscribing  self sacrifice below 

  

if the skull pieces fit

 directly  to the space

I'd  be anti-matter


dream

genetics


resetting    

 relics

like architect   

 galaxies built

  a passing age  

 dead with pharaohs , and denial queens 

      framing, and correcting lines pyramid's  echo

a sacred

    geometry

  never seen

 confronting the angles in words returning to live again

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 writing mojo


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writing mojo
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. hmmm ... if this is what you write when you're doin' time ... i wonder what happens when you're not ... i shall find out ... meanwhile ... here's a thought ... if achievement and experience were mutually exclusive ... and they are ... though we don't think so usually ... then this would be a magnum opus ... an epic ... comprehensive and inviting ...

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Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is so great. I loved the lines through each sentence. Fantastic work regarding a topic I feel most of us writers experience!

- Brittney

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Dye
If this is writers block, I must be doing it wrong. I love the concept and the way you have it written out like scattered thoughts. This is great!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


writing mojo

7 Years Ago

thank you Dye...what ever dude your an awesome writer...your doing it just right..Thanks for the rev.. read more
Dye

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome, and thank you so much, that was very nice and unexpected to hear. :)
Whatdya know....
automatic writing!
welcome to the paranormal
(*_*)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ha, very clever, I like the concept...you can un-cross out your brilliance now, the gig is up. If this is writer's block, I'll like to order several dozen cases please. ;-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


writing mojo

8 Years Ago

I have many cases, yet to be solved....thanks, glad you applaud my cleverness
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

You read me wrong, I applaud your talent.
this is pretty verbose for someone in the throes of writers block...this is a very surreal trip of the externalization of an artist's mind in frenzy actually creating in a non-creative state. such irony. i love the images, though as i read through them, meanings are cryptic but i know they hold much meaning for you. excellent piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is cleverly done, but also very evocative of the frustration that we all feel sometimes in the process. Very well done!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


you've got clever pasted all over this...the cross-outs, the con's eye view...good stuff

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tell me about it. I have actually looked at crumpled papers and saw something there in the shadows to write about. Scary! You covered it well; words and I have been friends long enough, now, they practically write themselves! What really drives you crazy is when you are writing notes to write about your boyfriend and you end up writing about your dog or something.

Posted 10 Years Ago


some crossed out geometry here, pretty good i hope you don't cross out everything you write

pulls up from a dive, connects builds its galaxies examining the self who is writer and pulls away just in time without knowing why

Posted 10 Years Ago


Well this is really interesting, for it to be for writer's block which we get, in itself is great. At the moment i actually have writer's block. :/ So reading this fits lolz. It's nice how this is interesting yet true, and the font crossed out and bold is great to fit the emotions of the words written for the poem. :D I liked these lines here a lot:
" ghost writing
insomnia
the phantom ties to the lost lover
where again
you can break even with past "

Posted 10 Years Ago



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